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Delightfully cheesy with a lot of fun dialogue. Probably the most lighthearted story I've read in the jam so far. Wonderful work! 

I'm left wondering where our friend Wallace is! Cracking good time though, and knowing rat ingenuity perhaps we can see a team-up in the future where they go see if the moon truly is made of cheese.

That was so cute!

Cute story with some really good light humor.  Well written.
Just, as a note, remember to read through the brief for the jam. Entries were supposed to be PDF for simplicity, and as good a writer as you are, you don't want to blow a competition or an entry just because you missed part of the instructions. 

It was really pleasant to read and I chuckled with Grandpa typical brit phlegm. I think it could have worked with a bit less dialogs so Grandpa puns would stand out more

Grandpa Grommit has me in stitches! Can't say I appreciate the anti-rat propaganda but it is a very funny story ;)