Hi! I have a few things. I marked up the PDF. I can share it from my Google Drive. I hope this works. I haven't finished going through the entire thing, but I wanted to share what I was able to do so far. Happy to discuss further, if my notations do not make sense.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lySIgSjtco9tP1iWoZtMiauXBMzXiNt6/view?usp=shari...