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OPR Writing Jam #14

Hosted by onepagerules · #oprwj14
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The Vengeful's WrathView project page

Vengeance does not come from peace
Submitted by Lise Finet — 21 hours, 56 minutes before the deadline
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The Vengeful's Wrath's itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Flow & Clarity#233.5043.684
Overall#293.3883.561
Concepts & Originality#313.6053.789
Adherence to Theme#393.0543.211

Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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onepagerulesHost91 days ago(+1)

Hello, thank you for participating in the Writing Jam #14! Please email customers@onepagerules.com, to claim your participation minis!

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Savage BruskiSubmitted99 days ago(+2)

Cool perspective from the stance of being non-militarized and survivalist and then shifting to "I'm burning you all." 

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Throwing Rocks - OPR Writing Jam #14 Submission
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tcd140130Submitted99 days ago(+1)

Oooh, this is the 1st First Person POV I've read in the jam so far. In that way, it gets to be a lot more emotional and internal, a bit rough here and there, but I think it works for the POV. Overall, pretty nice work!

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To Kill A Giant - OPR Writing Jam #14
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Lise FinetDeveloper98 days ago

Thank you! I was not sure it would render correctly but I'm glad you liked it. 

If you have more comments on elements you find rough please don't hesitate, I'd love to improve myself

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KacyuGamingSubmitted100 days ago

Interesting story.

I really like that they had to sacrifice something they shouldn't have to fight for.

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The Ineradicable Ignis
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jhontorSubmitted104 days ago(+1)

to me, there is a lot of hurt driving this. the story treats vengeance less like a cool heroic vow and more like something grief refuses to let go of. rough around the edges, but sincere and full of feeling. great work.

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An Apple, Unremembered
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mk812Submitted104 days ago(+1)

Very atmospheric and tense, I liked it. 

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Cheesecake
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