Oooh, this is the 1st First Person POV I've read in the jam so far. In that way, it gets to be a lot more emotional and internal, a bit rough here and there, but I think it works for the POV. Overall, pretty nice work!
Thank you! I was not sure it would render correctly but I'm glad you liked it.
If you have more comments on elements you find rough please don't hesitate, I'd love to improve myself
