Nice VN. The arts are superb. The character names are also pretty funny too haha.
Feels like there was a bit of dialogue choices in the beginning but there wasn't much in the second half so perhaps you ran out of time? I got really suspicious at the end though. I was fully expecting you to double whammy us 😂
I think it would feel a bit more polished if there was a sound that plays every time you click next on the dialogue.
Also it feels somewhat disconnected to have 2 seemingly separate stories in the first half and the second half, since the first characters didn't reappear. But they're still cute though so it's all good.
Oh and I love eating crow sandwiches hehe.