This game is actually impressively good. It did draw me in with the cute visuals but the writing is awesome and it's what keeps me engaged. Some parts felt a bit drawn out but for the most part it's good. I'm really glad to see the RPG Maker community is producing a lot of better looking games instead of the default asset stuffs I see all the time on Steam. I used to use RPG Maker too so I just like seeing it haha.
The amount of art assets in the game is huge, very impressive to see. With that being said though, the graphics does look to have weird scaling issues all over the place so it's one thing you could still improve on for sure.
One big obvious thing that's missing is sound effects. There were also a bug when I failed the 1st day the 1st time and then reloads, the textbox disappeared so I had to restart the game.
SPOILER:
Maybe it have something to do with the game jam limitation, but I feel like having a plot twist reveal at the end of day 1 where they were still 2 more days to go undersell the impact a bit. I haven't played through the rest of game yet so maybe my opinion will change but I think if the game ends right there or the reveal comes later then it feels much more impactful.
Overall, it's a really good entry, but I guess unfortunately doesn't get as many plays since it's download only but I think people should give this a try.