A lot of what you have written in your doc is very solid, but I wish to see more of the art direction with videos of the game. The working progress of what you have so far would be fine, considering what's required for sprint 2. And I want to know who the target audience of the game? What demographic is this game supposed to speak to?
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Thank you for the feedback, my aim is creating a realization game it can be used as an educational material or an awareness project by NGOs. That's why I have a broad audience from kids to adults. In my vision, it will become a light of heatwave realization. For art part I will focus on this and working hard about it as a solo dev!