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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Polish | #7 | 4.300 | 4.300 |
| Overall | #12 | 3.842 | 3.842 |
| Audio | #14 | 3.650 | 3.650 |
| Creativity | #14 | 4.200 | 4.200 |
| Art | #25 | 3.750 | 3.750 |
| Gameplay | #26 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| Theme Interpretation | #35 | 3.650 | 3.650 |
Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Smooth starting screen.
I like the little backstory between the messages. It's not really realistic to a phone messaging app (I think), but I think it's helpful to have here.
The time period kinda made me confused at first, especially on the first year. I thought Steve messaged me in the present times, but after seeing it again, I realized he messaged me in the past. I think there should be a date on each message, or at least at the top of the chat.
I like the story and how it gradually unfolds. No obvious or blatant storytelling at the start that tells everything you need to know.
Should've made it an option for Steve's 25th birthday, but I guess having it auto replies is part of the challenge and the story. I legit had difficulty in replying to Mia's invitation because of that xD
That end with all of the "soon" messages is a really nice touch.
I really like how you interpreted the theme for this one. It really fits, how one simple message, one simple decision can lead to another and another.
The art style and UI is clean.
The SFX is really good. So is the music. Both fits with the theme of the game.
Thanks so much! That’s a great feedback - I’ll add a date to the text after the jam! Thank you for playing!
What a fantastic entry!
Others in the comments have already stated exactly what I think, I can only reiterate that this is really really well written... and the story hit home a little more often than I'd like to admit. this felt very personal to me and even though playing through this gave me negative feelings about myself, it just shows how good of a job you did with this. I think its great that this game made me feel so intensely emotional.
well done, amazing submission!
Thank you so much! I feel this is something that most if not everyone struggles with at some point. We all want to be there for those we care about but its not always easy to follow through each time.. Thanks so much for playing - I really appreciate it :)
*Very* well-written dialogue, with creative uses of the digital interface to add non-dialogue story beats. The music perfectly supported the emotion, too, it sounded like being in a holding pattern. Drew me in immediately. And the moments where you have to type... and then the game takes it away from you. Perfect representation of losing to your negative tendencies. You do such a good job of characterizing him not only through his texts, but also Mia and Steve. "Is that a yes-yes or a Jake-yes?" Perfect.
Made me super sad... but in a good way. :(
Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear all those little details landed.
I'm sorry it made you sad... but also maybe not too sorry :P
you know what you did!!!
hehe🌝
Haha, how ironic that when I first saw this game, it caught my eye and I immediately wanted to play it. But then, after reading what it is about, I was afraid to open it and play, even though in the back of my mind it intrigued me. So I subconsciously said 'later', and that's how I missed this game until you commented on my own. I guess Jake and I are not so different after all... even though he's way more insufferable.
That was the most interesting game for me. Each time I manage to find new 10/10 games in this jam, but this is just on another level. The design is great, the storytelling is spot-on, especially the sleeping foreshadowing. This game really got me thinking about myself, since I'm not really that far away from Jake. God, procrastination is an awful thing.
I've got nothing to say. 10/10, give me more!
Ahh, thank you so much!! Reading this really made my day. 😊 Jake isn't really a bad guy - just someone who keeps telling himself there's always tomorrow/soon. I think a lot of us have been there. And thanks for noticing the sleeping foreshadowing too! really appreciate you taking the time to play and leave such a thoughtful comment. It means a lot!
Absolutely amazing, expressive, immersive entry. Well done! What is it that determines which ending you get?
Thanks so much! The second selection (date) + meeting the parents (will be there) leads to the dream ('good') ending. The other choices lead to another ending, with a slightly different ending based on the last choice ('go tomorrow' vs. not).
Wow! I've played quite a few games so far in this jam, and this has probably been my favorite experience so far. Fantastic story telling, and the choice of medium really made it hit home. The dialogue was perfect, and the little bits where you gather open-ended input (especially the one time I encountered when you actually let through at the end without replacing it) were amazing. The first ending I got was a real gut-punch, and I mean that in the best possible way (the second one was much happier).
I definitely did not expect to see any VN's in a 3-day jam, and certainly nothing of this quality. The only critique I have is that I would add a little bit of CSS to turn off `user-select` so that the text blurbs don't get selected as you're clicking through.
You should be really proud of this. Just amazing all around.
Aww thank you so much for playing and for the thoughtful feedback! I'm gonna add that css change after the jam :)
Wow...
A game made for a game jam in 72 hours, telling a story with just text.
and it really made me cry.
Just wow. Great job all over.
Thank you.
Thank you so much! So sweet!
They're all sad endings, but did you happen to get the 'dream' ending? It's probably the saddest one, but it's also my favorite hehe :)
I got the ending where Jake gets invited to Mia and Daniel's and it was the saddest one for me I think
On my second playthrough I got the dream ending I thik You are talking about and tbh it seemed much more happy to me than my previous one.
How many endings are ther in total
I would say 2 in total - Mia & Daniel's is one (with 2 slightly different wordings at the end), and the Dream one is another. Thanks for playing it multiple times!!
I guess, yeah, the Dream one is more optimistic, but it's sadly just a dream. The other one, with the "choose to come" option, became sadder with the dance happening behind him as he left, and life still goes on.
Wow! I am speechless.... This is perfect.
Thank you! 😊
I like that I'm able to view the archive from previous years. The backspacing over whatever was typed was a really fun moment. The archive is very immersive, that there's both a past and a present in the story. Very polished. Very well done!
Aww, thanks so much for the thoughtful comments! The backspacing one is my favorite feature hehe
ill come up with some feedback for this game soon, i promise
Haha, fitting comment. I'll be waiting... soon, i promise. 😉
I loved it. Great take on the theme!
thank you! 😊
Straight up Rom-Com, love it
Thank you! 🤗
This is a creative way to use the theme
Haha thanks!
Really cool game! I like it a lot! The story is so immersive.
Thank you! 😊
Very cool game! Nice story telling. What engine was this made with?
Thank you! I love visual novels. My art skills are pretty limited, so I built this one using html, css and js!
yooo what !!