The tutorial was very hard to read, to the point I couldn't figure out the controls. I feel bad leaving this bad comment, but it was honestly very confusing. The art and audio are amazing tho!
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Audio | #839 | 3.629 | 3.629 |
| Artwork | #2347 | 3.600 | 3.600 |
| Creativity | #4360 | 3.314 | 3.314 |
| Enjoyment | #5330 | 2.771 | 2.771 |
| Narrative | #5692 | 2.229 | 2.229 |
Ranked from 35 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
It's a game about a clock if you time come to 0 you lose
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I can see some potential, especially if the intention is to make it rhythm-based. Nice artwork and audio.
I did complete level one, but didn't find a level two - not sure if it's there or not!
It's nice, I like the concept, this is a little problem and its the teal text in the tutorial is quite hard to read also would be nice to have feedback when you collect clocks, good job.
this was very fun and cool to play. I like the art style and the music was cool. https://birdyowl.itch.io/one-more-minute
Very neat little game! I love the music and the rhythm aspect of it and I think it fits the theme really well. Very enjoyable to play and I especially appreciate that this is an android entry as well so I can continue playing it while chilling before bed. If I were to suggest any improvements, the instructions test could use being a little more clear. This said, I didn't find the concept hard to grasp and it didn't detract anything from the enjoyment. Well done!
i think this is like that music game i forgot the name of...what was it... forget it, point is i really enjoyed your wonderland, 10/10
I liked audio and art, they are nicely fit in this game! i think gameplay can be interesting, but maybe u should look to this game in another "plane".
What if this game can be more than runner, what if it can be story telling game with adventuring quest by quest, but will have combat system like u did? I think it will be nice to play in such game - talking with characters, taking quests with cozy mini games or collecting different items for quest, confronting with enemies and bosses in world in the way how u did this game, like a fight desk in deck builder games.
You did a great job, good luck with this project!
I will be glad if u play my game too <3
I think the art is really cool and I had fun finishing once I figured out what I needed to do. The tutorial was unfortunately mostly illegible to me (the font was really hard to read), so I had to try some things before finally figuring the controls out. I do think that making it so you can't just mash swing would be good in a future version. It was a fun little Rift of the Necrodancer-esque game!
Awesome art and sound design omg! But there's some problem at least for me in android side of things:
the touchscreen button doesn't feel responsive at all, there is not a lot of ways to tell if i clicked a button or not but if i had to guess, its because you put the button on the corner of the screen which on most phone is a deadzone where you actually cant click in a normal way.
And i cannot tell that i was supposed to alternate attacks, the button doesn't change sprites when i clicked so it was a bit annoying to play especially for a rhythm game. But so far this is my favourite game based on artwork and music, great job!
Kinda hard to get used to it at first, but once it clicks it's great! Loved the art
I enjoyed the game, especially the music - it really stood out and added to the experience. I think the game could benefit from having more sound effects, though, as they would make everything feel a bit more lively.
I wasn't a big fan of the tutorial. I actually figured out how to play by experimenting on my own, and I found that much clearer than following the tutorial. I think the tutorial could be improved to explain the mechanics more effectively or present the information in a more intuitive way.
The core idea is really interesting, and I'd love to see more content added in the future. Nice work!
Concept is really cool...I also really like art and aesthetic of the game..you have done great job with this game..With more juice this game would be awesome!!
Very cool art. I didn't understand everything because the font was quite hard to read on my phone but great job overall! 👍
I enjoyed it a lot had great art,unique theme but just the problem at the font u can change it later after game jam







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