Great narrative framing, really enjoyed the writing. The transition from static puzzle game to gun golf was an… interesting juxtaposition. I think Gun Golf could be a good mini-game on it’s own if you had more control over the gun itself, but then maybe wouldn’t fit the narrative quite so well.

I like the story and the narration a lot, really worked well and had me hooked through the entire thing. I will say that I found the first two gameplay segments a bit confusing, and the third was mildly infuriating because my mouse kepts moving ever so slightly and completely throwing off my aim. I believe the deadzones could be set a bit better with the gun aiming. Still enjoyable, I had a nice time with it!

I like how the entrepreneurs story is one of repeated attempts, failures, and eventual success!.. Only to be met with dismay. I found some of the minigames fun, but I had difficulty aiming when making small adjustments. Slowly moving my mouse to the right would cause the camera to drift a little to the left, not sure if that's an issue on my side but regardless, still a fun experience!

This is cool, very Stanley's Parable, I wish i could sprint but i understand why I can't LOL
I liked the atmosphere and the jokes about said atmosphere. Well written and well done!

Voice acting adds such charm to this game, and the vibes are on point. I wish I was a little smarter to solve the 2nd puzzle, I wanted to see what would happen if I did! I loved this game, good job!