I like this style! You've definitely got the retro style down, well done! The commentary on losing was a particular fun, cool!
A bit of suggestions:
The instructions in the game and the description below it are confusing, "A" does not start the game and does not change gravity, it is the letter "Z" that does it. It is worth fixing it
On level 2, to get into the pit, you need to pixel-target it, it's better to expand it a little