rich and beatiful writings, yet i feel something il lacking on the gameability side. 

What an incredibly surreal incursion! Clean, clear layout with a cohesive adventure structure. The imagery throughout leaves me wanting to learn more about this world. Hunters with an existential crisis may want to steer clear!

Interesting game mechanic. I like stuff like this! It would have been cool to add some more spatiality but I understand that's a bit tricky with a river XD

Excellent work, super clean layout, and beautiful writing throughout!

I loved how each ring ramped up the stakes somehow ever higher, and that there was still a small chance of hope for 1 or 2 Hunters, despite the destruction of the whole world in the basin.

Great writing and clean layout with nice fonts. I’m not too familiar with Trophy Dark but I can catch the vibe, and I love the premise!

This one is strangely great. I don’t jnow how to play this, but the premise and the tables are awesome! It’s openendness is weirdly similiar to my own entry (no pressure, you don’t have to read it, but I was reminded of it).

I love how evocative and clear your writing is! Everything is in motion and in the end it gets really existential. 

Also the three ring structure makes this perfect for a one shot. I'd love to play it one day.

This is beautifully written, and I love the PTS questions, I can imagine how it will become emotional and personal to the players. The last PTS question hits close to home. And I love how you write the conditions.