I had a blast making the art and maps!!! ArcaneSporcery really brought it with the writing, super creative and funny, and it was awesome working with them. I'm looking forward to running this in Knave one of these days. This hits a nicley weird mythical+scifi tone.
If I ran it, I'd probably make a few tweaks--everything feels quite friendly, so I'd probably make the grey aliens more gross, vulgar, and scary. Maybe I'd play up the Roc being really terrifying and aggressive, harassing the village of Thunderhill. I think it's nice to balance silliness with danger =).