I love the way this twists the Biblical story of doomed cities and salted wives. Really interesting and full of excellent (sad) vibes.
I love the cover image a lot, but I needed (for my own brain) the nodes in the text to be laid out diagramatically as well, even maybe in the greyscale background behind the text. It is hard for me to follow the 'leads to' numbers without a visual aid I can reference and say 'right'.
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Thanks for the comment and I do understand your point of view with this. Setting up and creating maps is still not in my arsenal, I've not been used to these before, need to spend some time to improve those for future modules. The idea of putting nodes behind the text in background is a good idea, I might try to incorporate that at the minimum. Thanks !