Appreciate the commentary, we felt that keeping the tone of the text for the entry was most important to the competition Appendix N theme but obviously with only 4 A5 pages, space is tight. We're hoping to do an expanded version after the judging is complete and I'll definitely take into account the presentation for easier use at the game table with larger text (and more rooms!) - a lot of the text could be read verbatim at the game table, which lends to the dark, forgotten civilizations being crawled through to achieve the goal.