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I like the concept and obviously these are the bones of excellence, but I feel like a few things in the full version are left a bit too understated. As a two-pager it does everything well, yet, perhaps you could use some of the space on page 1 to help clarify further details about the intended mechanism/procedures, a stat block, a FAQ block... As it stands, there's a few questions I am left asking about how to exactly execute this; obviously I like gluing the pieces together and that's the point, but suggestions never hurt. Other than that: there's a typo with "into into" in the intro paragraph's second sentence. Good work!

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Thank you for the feedback! I’m kicking myself for missing that typo. Lol

I’m considering writing a sequel for the Liminal Horror Jam, so all advice is welcome and appreciated. I’m excited to learn and improve!