Excellent aesthetics that compel one to dive right in and read - but, the layout, although awesome, has two small flaws that should be fixable: the end of the 2nd paragraph/room bleeds onto page 2, and the header and start of the 6th paragraph/room is awkwardly at the bottom left/end of the first column, before breaking over into the top middle/start of the first column. I believe that these are ultimately layout weaknesses that can be addressed with some effort, and perhaps elements like a tiny art piece (symbol even). I hope this isn't seen as cherry-picking criticism - I just think those are small blemishes to something that is otherwise fantastic. Disclaimer: I can't into layout/editing myself, so I'm wholly commeting as a reader, and understand that it takes time and effort to improve the layout as suggested. xD