Very cool graphic design!

wonderful reading, rich in wit and taste. I wonder how would work at a table... looks a little lacking in structure, at my eyes, at least

Gorgeous cover & layout! The writing is very snappy- not quite terse, but punchy, delivered as if we were the PCs who can only communicate in absolute necessity. No frills.

As a politics junkie, the content was like it was made for me. A stellar entry.

Wow. That cover is incredible. I love the tape texture over the Appx. N Jam sticker. 
A few favorite things:

• The Melody as the incomprehensible combination of all possible sounds, really cool concept
• The suggested ways to resist the melody—all compelling with creative points of failure or drawbacks
• Events for each segment and route! Lots of possible complications

so tasteful, mwach *chef's kiss*

Wow. I love the way you structure the adventure. And the art, wow!

It’s really neat to see an events-based rather than location-based adventure in this jam (great to change it up). I enjoy how much variation you’ve built in despite it being a small adventure, those random tables mean it would feel very different with repeated runs!

The melody is a highlight! Great interpretation of the title.

Interesting concept and gorgeous visuals!