I like the premise of the adventure, but I feel like it would benefit from having more interactive and interesting elements in the rooms—especially ones related to the plot. I'm fascinated by the Quill-Flurry.
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I greatly appreciate the feedback! I hope to flesh out this world and its surroundings a bit more in future writing, including the magic that influenced the dungeon’s design. I will be sure to get some drafting in soon. Drawing on more folkloric inspirations, I feel there’s grounds for entire enchantment tables and strange happenings to be played out in other scenarios.