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Overall, I love this location. I will likely use this at my table. You've got some great ideas.

You mention arcane residue a lot, but I seem not to be able to find what it does, which is a problem when the painting defends itself by shooting arcane residue and the oozes collapse into it. 

As others have mentioned, your layout could use some small adjustments. You have a lot of awkward white space which could have been filled by adjusting the text or adding small pieces of art. 

I think your creatures are very evocative, and with your descriptions, I think many GMs could adapt them to a system of their choice. 

Thanks for the constructive feedback. Will definitely take it all into consideration. Also wonderful to know, that it might get used at an actual table.