Good pitch, but non enough stuff to play with. The whole space is also smalla and crowded. That vibes with the general theme, but cripple esxploration and interaction. With a little more work and space can grow in a powerful dungeon.
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I like the premise of the adventure, but I feel like it would benefit from having more interactive and interesting elements in the rooms—especially ones related to the plot. I'm fascinated by the Quill-Flurry.
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Into the Effigy of OrielI greatly appreciate the feedback! I hope to flesh out this world and its surroundings a bit more in future writing, including the magic that influenced the dungeon’s design. I will be sure to get some drafting in soon. Drawing on more folkloric inspirations, I feel there’s grounds for entire enchantment tables and strange happenings to be played out in other scenarios.
This has everything you need for a short and sweet dungeon crawl: a mysterious past, stuff to explore and find, weird enemies, and environmental hazards. I like how why he was the Feathered Tsar is never deeply explained. Was it the spellbook or something more? good work.
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