Considering that you're using AI assets, the consistency of the characters and images is very good. As for the story, I didn't think I'd like it because of the size-shifting thing, but you managed to walk a Stan Lee-esque, Marvel-esque tightrope in staying at least somewhat grounded in reality. The characters are cute and seductive at the same time. The story, at least for me, is starting at the right pace. Not too slow and not too fast. It's also clear that you did a good job proofreading most of the writing before posting. Not everyone can say that. Okay, a couple of requests here.1. Some people, such as myself, don't like social media platforms such as Twitter, so I hope you consider setting up a simple Discord server. 2. Will you add any fatal vore (not Calumn) to Greytide? I know fatal vore isn't everyone's cup of tea, but I do enjoy it so. 3. Perhaps you should also consider setting up a Patreon account as well. There you can set up polls and such. Anyway, that's all I have for now. Keep up the good work. Cheers.:D