Considering that you're using AI assets, the consistency of the characters and images is very good. As for the story, I didn't think I'd like it because of the size-shifting thing, but you managed to walk a Stan Lee-esque, Marvel-esque tightrope in staying at least somewhat grounded in reality. The characters are cute and seductive at the same time. The story, at least for me, is starting at the right pace. Not too slow and not too fast. It's also clear that you did a good job proofreading most of the writing before posting. Not everyone can say that. Okay, a couple of requests here.1. Some people, such as myself, don't like social media platforms such as Twitter, so I hope you consider setting up a simple Discord server. 2. Will you add any fatal vore (not Calumn) to Greytide? I know fatal vore isn't everyone's cup of tea, but I do enjoy it so. 3. Perhaps you should also consider setting up a Patreon account as well. There you can set up polls and such. Anyway, that's all I have for now. Keep up the good work. Cheers.:D
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Holy shit, how did I miss that!? As a fellow reader, the only way I could think that makes sense is that the MC is under a lot of stress and is having a lot of new and bizarre things thrown at him all at once. Having him think about it only after the fact could be an easy fix. Like " oh shoot dogs can't have chocolate! Can Timber have chocolate!? Oh no I'll have to be more careful in the future and maybe ask Timber about it." Or something like that. You get the idea.
Wow, someone released a VN without doing it one chapter at a time? How.....novel....(Buhaha, sorry, sorry. I couldn't resist. ) I'm happy to hear you might be creating more stories. Hopefully some vore ones hehe. You should give some thought to opening a Substar and/or Discord if you do. I'd subscribe for sure!
Wow what a great VN this is shaping up to be! Great plot, good art, not a lot of confusing choices that slow down the main plot line, and the writing is done by a professional. I was going to just read this gem to the current build end then await a new chapter, but I just got to the point where we find out about Timbers special diet, which for me is just the cherry on top(yes I'm one of those people). Thanks for the great read so far!
P.s. Do I still get a sketch if I sign up for your Patron?