Really great short story. The visuals are really lovely accompaniment to the detailed writing. I found myself very charmed by both the collage work and illustration, it all felt very economically/smartly applied.
The writing itself feels very personal and specific in the best way, even with an essentially anonymized narrator. I think a little of that is due to the really gestural illustration, but also because the writing shows "only" what needs said for this particular vignette into her life.
There were a couple points where the audio wasn't doing it for me (the more diagetic approaches in the beginning with all the shuffley sounds, one or two of the track choices). I wanted more of those snappy twig sounds!
I found the Sun ending a lot more compellingly done than the Rot ending, to the point that the choice felt kind of "eh" or less impactful to me in hindsight. Didn't pull me out of my enjoyment, just felt like Sun had a lot more meat put on it. Maybe I just like happier endings.