Cute platformer, and great job for a solo project ! I have to say the jump feels a bit weird but that is maybe just some polish to do. For the rest, it was fun to play !
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Layers Of Personalities's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Audio | #69 | 2.360 | 2.421 |
| Fun | #72 | 2.308 | 2.368 |
| Overall | #73 | 2.288 | 2.347 |
| Visuals | #73 | 2.308 | 2.368 |
| Gameplay | #74 | 2.206 | 2.263 |
| Theme | #74 | 2.257 | 2.316 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Theme explanation
The main character will discover hidden parts or layers of her personalitiy every time she unlocks a new power.
Comments
Congratulations for making a submission as a solo developer!.
For the music i recommend you to be careful with chromatic notes, you did a music piece on A minor which naturally only has the white notes of a keyboard, i see you tried on making it a melodical A minor scale with a F# and a G# but you went, on the piano, A, E, C F#, C, C G#, E, which has a tritone between C and F#, and C and G#.
Tritones are a bit hard to use because these are chords or intervals that generate some tension, chords that crave for a resolution, and you are also adding a G# which makes that melody a bit more unstable.
If you are just starting on music, i would recommend you doing something easier, tritones and changing chromatic notes are not a very easy task, on A minor you could actually, stick with only A minor, D minor, and E minor, (E dominant seventh being pretty common too, E, G#, B and D).
You can also use reverbs or equalizers to make your instruments sound much better.
Also, i do not think the music for this has to be as spooky, this game it´s more lighthearted.
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I Became Friend with an Onion GirlieThanks for the feedback! You're right, I'm just a beginner at making music and still don't understand too much about tones, chords and all those things related to music. Also, the music wasn't supposed to be spooky when I was making it, it was supposed to give a feeling of introspection and self-reflection. Definitely gonna change the music alongside other things on a future update
cute platformer! :) shame you couldn't put all you wanted in time, hope you'll get a chance to revisit it some day!
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Thanks, Mom...Cool platformer, it makes it more interesting given the story. I've never played a platformer where the jump is more powerful than the movement force. I was lucky that sometimes falls wouldn't lead to a game over but having Coyote time could make it more forgiving. Congrats for submitting to the jam, good job! :)
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Surprise Party AnimalsGreat job making a platformer! It was cool to see the different layers of the level. We got to the end, would love to see how you expand on this in the future.
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Star Stacked: An Idol ManagerI was surprised when I fell down and didn't immediately die. but rather reached another layer! The music was eerie which felt fitting to the theme of the game.
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