Aww, thanks Mimi, very glad that you liked it 💖.
Congratulations for making a whole game by yourself too!.
I do appreciate that you said cute girly music, too, very glad to read that too, that's my default style
This looks so prettyyy, the art is amazing, so polished.
And, the game is not only in theme but also, is a very creative puzzle game, which, i like that it always guides you from start to finish with no lose condition, even if you made mistakes the game tells what you are missing, which, i think that makes it more comfortable, specially when the orders get too detailed.
Very creative idea, layers for a game about constellations was very clever.
It´s interesting to see how the stars make a pattern.
Maybe it would have been nice to have some ethereal music as the background, and, if you are afraid that it could sound a bit boring, it could have been a little playlist.
Cute sfx too, i like that it randomizes.
Wow, these are pretty neat ideas actually! 💖.
I do appreciate the time you spent on your words. The percentage and moving platform idea are so good, i felt like the plant minigame was too easy but at the same time i wanted to make everything easy.
And for sure, some expressions would be lovely actually, many thanks for your comment 💫💕.
Congratulations for making a submission as a solo developer!.
For the music i recommend you to be careful with chromatic notes, you did a music piece on A minor which naturally only has the white notes of a keyboard, i see you tried on making it a melodical A minor scale with a F# and a G# but you went, on the piano, A, E, C F#, C, C G#, E, which has a tritone between C and F#, and C and G#.
Tritones are a bit hard to use because these are chords or intervals that generate some tension, chords that crave for a resolution, and you are also adding a G# which makes that melody a bit more unstable.
If you are just starting on music, i would recommend you doing something easier, tritones and changing chromatic notes are not a very easy task, on A minor you could actually, stick with only A minor, D minor, and E minor, (E dominant seventh being pretty common too, E, G#, B and D).
You can also use reverbs or equalizers to make your instruments sound much better.
Also, i do not think the music for this has to be as spooky, this game it´s more lighthearted.
This is a pretty neat idea, and, by how much layers this has, this becomes a perfect match for the theme.
I feel like the secondary pattern becomes a bit too detailed, the main pattern has a bigger resolution and somehow i felt it like two different resolutions at the same time, kind of similar to matching a 2x pixel art with a 3x pixel art, but, very pretty.
I liked that you can change colors too, like if you were using any app for drawing.
A sad story, which i like actually, very tender, and very pretty art.
The ending for me was at the part where she said something like "I was taught to take care of everyone else before myself", which, from somebody who does that, i have seen it´s pretty relatable for autistic girls and some women overall, from some people on youtube, like Psych2Go.
It´s a pretty creative idea for the layers theme to do a game about Dj mixing.
And for sure, the effort you spent on the art is appreciated.
For the music, i would recommend you to be careful when writing a melody, try to make it more cohesive, try to repeat motifs, not to use notes too far from the other too often (on a melody), to have a stablished rhythm, to avoid the kind of stuff that makes a melody to lose it´s musical sense, but the harmony, kicks and hi-hats were nice.
This looks soooo gorgeous, feels very professional, the UI seems to be inspired by cozy games like Animal Crossing, and i loved to see that detail.
Like, how you were able to do such amazing game in only 9 days?, i got so amazed, it even has a save game feature.
My only feedback it´s that, the jump and harvesting gacha sound effect could be a bit softer.
From somebody who does not play shooters, i actually enjoyed this one!.
All of the 2D art is soo pretty, you got a very good artist, and a good composer as well, i like a lot the mixing of the music, the intro leitmotif at the boss fight theme adds some charm, too, i like how the music has some bright, like a toy piano for example, it fits the candy/toy theme.
I got to finish the game but i would have liked a little checkpoint after the parkour on the Boss level, because the Boss it´s hard to defeat.
The intro and ending art are soooo gorgeous, very very pretty, that seems like a lot of work.
The game overall was pretty fun too, i appreciate the variety it has with the power-ups, sword, shield and bow.
Also, i would say this game is beginner friendly because i do not play this sort of games but i felt like this had a pretty balanced difficulty.