No worries. Not everything is for everyone. It's why I mentioned this one really wasn't for me. I figure it let you know to take things with a grain of salt if you were aiming a different direction. In a jam, there's often not a lot of time to go digging more than a glance into side things like landing page, etc. I still think it goes a long way to indicate on the entry itself exactly what the expected system you are using will be. I could see where you were going with the map, it just ended up being an art-only thing for me. When you only get 4 pages, dedicating a whole page to something that is (in essence) just a visual felt a bit rough. Feel free to ignore any of my advice or use it as you wish. I try to give deep dives on every game I review so the creators can really see how someone is reading through it in real time and where their mind may go. I wish more people would do long reviews like that to show exactly how they are reading through the documents so people can see how the flow is going. Hope you find success with the expansion down the road!