Good basic heist. The premise is quite interesting, but the heist needs spice and a lot of finish work to be really grest

As is said already: Page 1 is bigger than the adventure. The map itself needs a few rooms more, some hallways, perhaps a tower with something in it.

I think this could’ve worked with a twist: The players are not the thieves, but any number of hook-employees run against the players who are the disguised guards, trying not to blow their cover. A big table of events happening on every corner of the big map during the night (fixed and random) till the duke appears in the morning to celebrate the hymn.

First page is a banger. I love dungeons in unusual places!

I like the premise, and delivery, but I feel the adventure is a little dry afterward that. The rooms are dressed quite mundanely. A touch more wonder and peril could turn this into a banger. 

A simple yet elegant design, just like the adventure itself. I really like the premise, but I think the rooms could have more elements that players can interact with to support the premise, especially things related to the hymn itself. Great job!

Love the concept, very much my type of setup, grounded with a layer of existential horror. 

What I thought worked well 

• Concept is neat , first page hooked me
• Very open and agnostic, can use it for almost any game, like that
• Simple yet with a lot of potential, was already visualising all the chaos in the huge space

What I thought could be improved

• I lacked a bit of the hymn after the first page. It kind of ends there and then it's just rooms and some minor events. Was hoping for outcomes or effects of the hymn at least
• Lacked the sense of a big crowd and ongoing sermon throughout, could have been nice to add some reinforcement because the idea is great
• The text on dark grey is not very accessible and felt hard to read

Great job! Clear layout, an inventive situation and frankly a very cool story behind it. Apotheosis via a hymn is a great way to interpret the title. Also really good job in not making a church feel too linear - that's hard to do! I'm also jealous you fitted so much in but still had room for a cover, more than I managed!

I like this, even more in the context of this being your first module. You can be proud of this!

A classic, evocative dungeon crawl! It feels delightfully retro. 

This was a fun read! The language is loose and breezy and approachable - I felt reading it like I could immediately bring it to the table and just go.

I got the sense that having the maps blown up big, and tracking everything on them as table battle mats with miniatures, would perhaps be the best way to reliably track how many priests and guards remain, and where they remain at.

The visual design could be cleaned up a bit - sometimes sections felt like they had too much space, while the creature statistics, for example, are kinda cramped in their bounding box.

I like that you kept the dungeon map and associated rooms on the same page, that's good design. I'm not a big fan of monsters that 'might' be somewhere though, just my personal taste.