(Submission 3/29 - "Hero's Goodbye" by ChwrlueThe4th)
I can tell you have a good sense for music theory and there are good ideas in the track! Very emotional and triumphant!
The orchestra seems a little dry and seemingly stock, which can be something to be improved upon. One suggestion of a free VST would be Spitfire's BBC Orchestra. It isn't the best of the best, but it will dramatically improve your final mix! Another thing I noticed is the lack of stereo width, making it sound like a music player rather than an orchestra. If you want to have a believable orchestra (using real or fake instruments), you need to place your instruments as if they were performing in front of you. You can go research orchestra positioning relative to the conductor's stand, and it will make an incredible difference!
Great piece nevertheless! Thank you Chwrlue!