(Submission 4/29 - "Time Gears End Credits" by CuyGuy)
The spiccato section is really cool and well-composed, as well as your usage of the Dorian mode! It really makes the piece feel heroic! Your sense of melody is quite wonderful and it really brought the piece together!
One thing I am noticing is that there are some elements that are clipping in the left ear, although I would assume this isn't your fault as I noticed from a previous comment of yours that you were deaf in your left ear. At 1:50, the melody becomes somewhat random and unplanned, which I don't think was the intended result, but that's just how it felt for me.
Nevertheless, I enjoyed listening to your piece and I'm excited for what you plan on doing next! Thanks CuyGuy!