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(Submission 4/29 - "Time Gears End Credits" by CuyGuy)

The spiccato section is really cool and well-composed, as well as your usage of the Dorian mode! It really makes the piece feel heroic! Your sense of melody is quite wonderful and it really brought the piece together!

One thing I am noticing is that there are some elements that are clipping in the left ear, although I would assume this isn't your fault as I noticed from a previous comment of yours that you were deaf in your left ear. At 1:50, the melody becomes somewhat random and unplanned, which I don't think was the intended result, but that's just how it felt for me.

Nevertheless, I enjoyed listening to your piece and I'm excited for what you plan on doing next! Thanks CuyGuy!

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Yeah, bedroom producer who can't always use speakers here, and while I'm not deaf in the left ear, my hearing loss is ranging from 50 to 100 dB and my hearing aid can't really compensate for that in a way that lets me properly judge music (also a big reason why I'm doing a lot of stuff with orchestra, because then the stereo imaging is part of the library and I don't have to attempt to pan in mono).

Around 1:50 I was trying to lead into the ending and I did that by reducing the bassline from this four note sequence to just three measures of D and one measure of C and I tried to keep using the musical ideas I had used earlier in a more varied harmonic context. Re-listening now with fresh ears a few days later, I totally get how that feels random. Thanks for pointing that out.

Thanks for listening and enjoying!