Hi,
I don't know the mechanics so. can't comment directly - though I feel I could easily transpose. those to Traveller or Airtight or a YZE game.
The ending could do with a little more. The atmosphere is breathable which means it's likely there's food. This isn't the end of the mission; it's the beginning of THE COLONY! I'd be excited to play that option? I'd probably be the only PC wanting to stay!
Thanks a lot for your review, Lategamer! I really appreciate you taking the time to write such detailed feedback :-) Although I designed the adventure for LUMENDARK, you are right that it is generic enough to be played with other systems.
I’m really glad you enjoyed the atmosphere and the way the different sections of the adventure fit together. That’s something I put quite a bit of thought into, so it’s great to hear that it worked for you!
I am now really interested in the approach you mentioned… THE COLONY! If I end up updating it and writing a V2, I may have to include this possible ending ;-)
