Psiocratic Press is two people as such all our comments will differentiate between Will, Jacob, or Both's feedback.
The document is very dense, and while we appreciate that it is being thorough it might have been better to cut some content for the jam, and add it back in later when you didn't have a page count restriction. As it currently is the document can be hard to parse. -Psiocratic Press
I really like the ideas you have here, and can tell you're very passionate about them. If you were to expand this in the future I'd love to see some magical items reated to fishing, magic rods etc. -Jacob
I'm going to be honest, while this submission is really cool, and I'm sure there are tables out there for it, I would never use this at my table. I'm not a fan of the fishing mechanic in draw steel, and I don't feel that more detailed mechanics helps. -Will