Really cool concept, love the art! You gave us a taste, and it left me wanting more; I would love to see this expanded upon. The storytelling it facilitates is great for any table. Personally, I would love a little more mechanics, but that is just my preference. I do think some of the abilities in rewards could use a couple of passes cause some of the wording is more complex than it could be and could be tightened up later on through playtesting. Overall great though!
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Thank you! The art was done by my good friend NorthlyArt (https://www.instagram.com/northlyart/.
Yes indeed, I the mechanics part of the rewards definitely need some clean up language-wise, balacing and expansion.