The ideas here are exceptionally well formatted and presented, and its clear that a great amount of creative love went into this submission. That said, I believe making these ideas into kits was too ambitious. A neat concept to explore for sure! However, a kit action needs to be a basic no-cost ability you can rely on. These ideas are exceptionally cool, but don't suit that role.
I think reworking these into titles (titles that even upgrade kits, maybe?) would preserve the magic of what you've written and give these ideas their necessary room to breathe. Would love to see whatcha come up with if you work with these more.