I'm also reading all of the other comments you're receiving and I totally see that it can be frustrating and even hurtful to read some of the more mean spirited ones. It's scary to put yourself out there with something you worked hard on for so long. It can become and feel quite personal. Especially as someone who also loves to write and wants to release a game at some point. I'm not sure if I will ever feel prepared for the criticism. I just know that it will get to me at first, justified or not. I try to be fair in my reviews and always share my honest thoughts.
I just checked, I'm still on version 0.1 - so my bad, at the time I wasn't aware that you put out a fix already. :) That's a surprise, did you get help with the German translation?
One of my favourite AVN's - Realm Invader (which is also quite similar to Eternum) tends to be really jokey as well and faces a similar problem, the humor is great for the most part but it can be hard at times to feel the stakes if most of it is treated as a joke. The character writing really helps in that regard, since they feel charismatic, distinct and charming, things that make me care for them.
I feel like I'm also missing some context from your already existing Spanish speaking community, insider jokes and the like, (the Deadpool sequences come to mind) they probably came to expect a lot of the stuff. I'm glad that we see eye to eye here, most of the great (Shonen) anime that we all know and love have a emotional core too after all, friendships and bonds are a important factor, humor can be something that brings people together too, It's a beautiful thing even, but it's only one part that makes up the human experience. :)
There will be stuff even I will not pick up on, Bleach would be another example. (The one title I didn't read or watch from the original big three) I think I saw you quoting the man (Tite Kubo) before.
I know about Honey Select (didn't create anything with it yet though) and there are a lot of fan games out there, I assumed most of them were using mods or (re)created the characters from scratch.
I have a softspot for bratty tsunderes who warm up to the MC over time haha so I can see Natasha become one of my favourites. :D I feel bad for not actually picking up on any clues for the puzzles though, I don't even know what I need to watch out for. Can you give me a few pointers?
Yeah, scenes like that are often femdom coded, but can also be quite playful and teasing
Of course, take it easy, tio ;) It's nice that you showed a little of the roadmap even though you don't promise a date or a schedule for upcoming updates.
That's a looong time for having the flue, in most cases they only last a few days - I hope you checked in with your doctor. I hope it isn't as severe anymore. Maybe you should have waited a little longer with your release, I imagine it's quite overwhemling to deal with all the feedback and even working on bugfixes and the like while dealing with the flu.
You're welcome! Great job on the introduction of your game, I already mentioned it in my very first comment but I imagine that this site (and your website) played a big part in it's success. The presentation really stands out and gives the impression of an quality game with big ambitions. Possibly even to its own fault since a lot of people already come in with their own big expectations that are hard or even impossible to met. Maybe they even expected something else entirely. You can't please everyone anyway. My impression is that this project will grow over time, you will refine your skills and carve out your own niche. :) I hope you will get better soon, bless you!