The melody is very memorable ! What a great job with so little time, I'm very impressed !
The only thing that confused me was the synth's part. Don't get me wrong : the melody is great, really, I loved it, it's just the synth choice that I'm confuse with haha. I think it feels a bit "aggressive" compared to the rest of this beautiful piece. I think an electric guitar would have been great but, if you want to keep the digital feeling of it, replacing this synth with a theremin-like sound for exemple could keep the feeling of the instrument but reduce the aggressive tone of it in some ways (and could give you a reeaaaally nice portamento on top of it).
But that's the only critiscism that came into my mind, I really enjoyed listening your track, you did a great job at conveying feelings and emotions. That's why I think you're a really great composer ! I'm just sad that you didn't post any socials so I can listen to more of your works but I understand. I just hope to see you in another jam some day.
Well done !