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Thank you so much for your advice ! I know it could be very bad ear fatigue  (I'm not used to be on a track with time pressure like that so I think my brain fried or something haha). I think that I prefered the track before the mix so the frustration build up little by little, I just need to learn how to deal with that feeling. But I totally agree on the mids and lows, I will be more cautious on that matter for the next time. 

Your track is amazing and I'm indredibly glad to have been on the same jam as so muck talented and kind people like you, all thanks to you !

The melody is very memorable ! What a great job with so little time, I'm very impressed ! 

The only thing that confused me was the synth's part. Don't get me wrong : the melody is great, really, I loved it, it's just the synth choice that I'm confuse with haha. I think it feels a bit "aggressive" compared to the rest of this beautiful piece. I think an electric guitar would have been great but, if you want to keep the digital feeling of it, replacing this synth with a theremin-like sound for exemple could keep the feeling of the instrument but reduce the aggressive tone of it in some ways (and could give you a reeaaaally nice portamento on top of it). 

But that's the only critiscism that came into my mind, I really enjoyed listening your track, you did a great job at conveying feelings and emotions. That's why I think you're a really great composer ! I'm just sad that you didn't post any socials so I can listen to more of your works but I understand. I just hope to see you in another jam some day. 

Well done !

Thank you so much ! Yeah I think that I was just very tired haha, it makes me feel a liitle bit better to know that it is not as bad as I thought. I also think that the mids are way to present so this is really good advice, thank you ! I'm always so scared to let the lows taking too much space in my mixes -it is something that I did a lot when I started- so I guess I'm too self-conscious about it now haha. You did an amazing job with your guitar on your track, it was very nice and refreshing to hear some acoustic instrument ! Good job to you too !

The guitar sounds so good, I love it ! Which brand is it ?

 I find your track very original and unique to the subject (which, in my opinion, is a good thing !). The only thing that I can say (again, in my opinion and I just talk about this event in particular because the track in itself is amazing quality) is that I would love a longer or a more progressive build up on the intro but it is just my personnal feeling because I love intros haha. Really good job, you're a great guitarist ! Well done !

Hope to see you in another one too ! I'm sure our paths will cross again haha

You're absolutely welcome, my brain was very pleased to ear your work so it's all thanks to you haha !

Thank you so much for your very kind words ! If only I had more time and energy, I would have done a lot of things very differently but the ear fatigue was very strong at some point so I just gave up haha. But it was fun to do, I hope you enjoyed the jam too. Thanks again and also :  you did great on your project, well done ! 🧙‍♂️

Well, that's a banger over here ! I especially love the sort of fluttering piccolo/strings here and there. I would say the same thing as CuyGuy on the instruments panning but that's really the only criticism that I have in stock haha. You did make clearly one of the best performances of this jam in my opinion ! Well done, I would love to see more of your works in the future ! 🧙‍♂️

Really nice track ! I like the way you represented time and nostalgia, it works so well. It's hard for me to find criticismto say about it haha, I just like it the way it is (especially for the very short time that you had). In the future tho, if you want to push it further,  maybe it would be nice to add even more variety with different little sounds here and there but you already delivered a great job with the emotional feeling of it in my opinion ! 🧙‍♂️ Well done !

So good mate, I love it ! Good job with the vocals (and the smooth sax hehe).

🐝🐝🐝🐝 Ye like jazz ? 🐝 🐝🐝🐝 

(really good, I love it)