You are leading very nicely into the more foreful section of the track. The harmonies are great (especially love how your choir is breaking out of the established harmonic structure) and the instrument choices are awesome.
My one recommendation would be to revisit the rhythm starting around 2:00 - you are leading into the end of the track, but the mid metallic rhythm sounds like it prepares the listener for a new high energy section.
You made it a tough challenge to try and find something in your piece to be not 100% happy with. Just a fantastic composition all around.