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I appreciate a supplement! Plenty of sailing stories to explore in this system. Well written and evocative tables.

I think the red outline/shadow you added on the text is a little distracting.
Similar to others, I would like to see the adventure hooks with a little more Guide support. And the adventures get more space too. I think you could give this another page to make it shine!

Thank you.

Can I ask a follow up about the red outline? I don't have anything (software wise) that should be a red outline so I'm curious where you saw that so I can delve a bit deeper?

The adventure side was a deliberate light touch. Really a "get a guides brain juices flowing"..... With the mechanical volume that I feel is needed (tables etc) - for a trifold I'm considering whether including it is any value, or actually better of being dropped all together. There's not really room to expand beyond whats written in this format (I feel its either a lot or a little as it is).

The feedback does have me thinking

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CosmicCadet6 days ago

It's the drop shadow on the text I think. Maybe I'm just going crazy!

They are great hooks! But you're right. The trifold is quite limiting on space. If you love them, leave them in there. The fact that people want more means they're interested to start with!

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