One of my favourites! I like the cohesive design and the story is clear and neatly contained and on brand.
- Kinda misses the theme. I see the environmental description of the coast, but that doesn't really feature in the meat of the adventure.
- I feel the Fatherfog vibes, but I'm missing the threat from The Fog. Could the Rising Tide bring some of that closer to the PCs?
- Lighthouse should be called Foghouse. Does it start on or off?
- "Shakey" > shaky; The Angler : it's > its
- Please, change your header font! Some of those letters don't look like they're supposed to haha (I'm sure you can get one similar)
- Logos should probably get the same blue treatment as the rest of the pamphlet.