That was so beautiful! I wanted to take my time and enjoy it. I honestly have no idea how you made all this in just one month and a half. Not only it was a self contained story with beautiful prose, but the images were all of high quality and in such unique and soft style.
I am a sucker for "sad" endings, and I kinda knew what was going to happen almost at the end, when Cael mentioned the prayer thing. It was heartbreaking, but I loved it. I hope you continue with the rest of the anthology. It will be a pleasure seeing more of your work, which to be honest, it's a breathe of fresh air. Or maybe I just love these kind of stories.
I feel a couple of characters from my own story could get along Cael and Enoch, hehe. My only suggestion is that the sound effect used for the writing could be a tad louder... To me that sound is ASMRish haha. I lowered the music volume, but still it was barely noticeable. I loved the other SFX used too (I'm using the SFX from the same people on Pixabay, haha).
In short: thanks for making this beautiful story! I've played around 15 demos and this is the one I felt more in synch with.