1. When talking about skipping several seasons, I think 1 wealth per season is too much.
2. Advance a Faction is cool.
3. I like deeper construction mechanics, though.
4. I like acquiring abilities.
5. Embark on a Journey is also very nice.
6. +1 Recovery Value sounds like a lot if we're talking about skipping maybe 8+ seasons.
7. I would also not grant +1 Renown per season. Maybe per two.
8. I also think more of these options should come with a minor nuisance.
9. I also think that a Retainer shouldn't gain a level every season.
10. Nor should you gain an edge per skill per season.
11. Other than that, this looks annoyingly good for how long we had to work on submissions.