I like the choice of bass, very moody.
The 5/4 time is sadly not very present - the clock tick is in 5/4, but everything else sounds like a 4/4 over an out-of-time click track. It would help to add some clear expression in the bassline, that keeps to the five beats and is strong on the 1 and the 3 or 4 (consistently on the same one) to really get the feel for the meter.
But I can totally see this track as something in a steampunk game.