this was fun to read. I do feel that the intro paragraph left me a bit confused as to what was happening. You say the fire on the peak was reclaimed bringing tragedy to the villagers, but I feel like one more sentence making it clear that this fire on the peaks was helping the villagers or something and now it’s been taken from them would have helped me understand what’s going on. But I ultimately got it.
My fave part is the villager mechanics. That’s pretty fun and well thought out. a little mini game perhaps. All the little mechanical bits throughout the pamphlet make good sense!
The animal spirits are cool and I like the little puzzles with each. I just feel like each location along the journey doesn’t give much beyond what animal we find there. I would have liked a bit more to work with.
I love the look of it and it was generally easy to read the little animal portraits and art is fun!!