Hey, I've just listened to your track!
I really liked the metallophone and the harmonic progressions. The atmosphere at the beginning is awesome and immediately sets the mood.
For the more energetic section, I think it could be interesting to add some short string accents alongside the brass hits to reinforce the impact and energy.
I also noticed a few notes that sounded a little unusual to my ears, perhaps because of the register or the harmony in those moments.
Good luck with the rest of the voting period!