It was a really good game. I didn't see any faults or what was wrong because I'm not a professional VN developer, but my expectations were pretty low. I thought the game would be huge and have useless dialogues, but honestly, the game turned out way better than I expected. I often try games from popular game jams which are usually overrated. Your game wasn't that big, the narrative was really good, the sprites were great, and overall my experience was excellent. Keep Doing