Played the game, it was pretty cool art is pretty nice music is good too, it fits the world very well, I do think that the openning narration is kinda long? and I guess that it tells the story alot if you follow through it, a small suggestion is you can build up the story as you go on the game, not full throttle it in the intro. give clues of the lore as the player spend more time ingame. would like too if you give feedbacks and suggestion for my game. I fixed the issue the game did not post even when I submitted my page. I think that is on me, my internet kinda sucks, but I have refreshed it and it is available for download now, Thankyou very much