Really cool game. Took me two tries to get the good ending, but I'm also really bad at remembering names. Its a really interesting idea and I love the atmosphere of the game. It reminds me a lot of the Superhot VR menu, in case you know that one. And the characters somehow remind me of that Roblox game Animal hospital.
It does get a bit underwhelming after some time with only two things to check, but if I understand correctly this notepad drawing would also be a extra mechanic? Also if its not working in WebGL builds, maybe its because it uses something that WebGL 2 does not support, if you change the graphic API to WebGPU in the unity project settings it might work.
But overall I really liked this. I can see that there was a lot of effort and love put into it, especially with 6 people working on it