Nice. the only criticism I have is that everything on the desk felt a bit small. I think maybe improving visibility would be a good idea. other than that I enjoyed it, the art style was nice, I liked the focus on the individual characters. I think the them fit perfectly and totally I'm not biased at all.
also there must have been some mistake, I'm pretty sure everything on the kids ID checked out. all the information was arcuate and the expiry date hadn’t passed and it certainly looked official. I just have to assume the Uncivilised person that got in that day was the hoity-toity rich lady.
also felt like the spider man pointing meme seeing the premise of the game.