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The graphics and sprites are amazing, very well polished. 

To be fair I didn't play long since this is not my type of game. I did however notice a bug in the street fighter minigame, whatever I did I could not see my character nor press any of the arrow keys (playing on windows).  After that I stopped playing (not because of the bug, just because I wasn't vibing with it).

Startup was very smooth, I did notice the choose your name screen was untranslated (still in German) but that was the only such bug I encountered. I liked the option to play the sequel if desired but I didn't try to do so.

Without playing the prequel, the story start felt a bit random and like a slog, a lot of infodumping with very little agency or story-beats happening. Again, not my genre so I don't know if that is normal or not? It was only the very start but very quickly I didn't feel like reading everything anymore. The short narrated part in the beginning was also the only narrated part? For me that narration was unnecessary since I read faster anyways but that's just my opinion of course

I wish you the best of luck with further development!

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Thanks a lot for your feedback!
Im glad you liked the polish. I will take a look at the bug in the streetfighter minigame. 
Making the start smooth for players who have not played the prequel is a major concern, and I will see how to improve this further. Could you tell me exactly where you lost interest? That would be helpful information.
In general, Chapter 1 and 2 are a a bit slow, as the story needs to build momentum before the big turn of events in Chapter 3. (It's hard to condense them, while also giving the player time to develop the necessary closeness to the characters to care for them, once tragedy happens. A common problem for visual novels with deeper and longer story lines. – Not saying that I can't improve on that, though. :)
The narration – some people like it better than reading, others don't. So we have it usually a bit at the start (and it can be turned off anyway). In professional VNs is narrated throughout.